Film Review

For our film we wanted a outside perspective on how it looked before submitting our final piece. We did not want any friends or family reviewing it because we didn't want any bias to be portrayed in the review. Instead we wanted one of instructors to evaluate our piece because they are very experienced in that field. Utilizing our teachers is very convenient because they are very accessible to us. Since we see them everyday for classes finding the time to talk to them would not be an issue. Deciding which teacher would review our film was the difficult part. All of our relationships with our teachers are different. We really wanted to make sure that no bias was present. Since we all have Ms. Moran as our American history teacher we all agreed to ask her. When she agreed to review our media she first complimented my acting. She said that I portrayed horror emotions really well. She also really enjoyed the child like theme we incorporated. She pointed out the Disney cups that we had at the tea table as well as the room. Although we did a lot of great things, she did have a couple of critiques. In the film when I began to drink out of my tea cup she could not really tell it was blood because of the lightning. It left our teacher confused on why I was making confused faces when I was drinking. In order to fix this issue we decided to add a scene that would make the blood more visible so that the audience could understand. Overall she really enjoyed the film. She believes if we make those minimal changes that the film will be even better. I am glad we received an outside perspective and I am looking forward to making those edits.